Horizons pink.

**parch** · August 24th, 2001, 02:18 PM

I tried to see myself in the mirror at noon and I saw a jumping perfection of crow. I tried to kiss myself last night and I died in my lips. I tried to speak to my ears and they hung me for a fool. I took the cross and fairness away. I hid the truth for real Equality. I escaped my own racket of bars and I strung out a new clothes line of worn out disguises. In the middle of mother Earth I can be one with the Silence. This is my forgiving. I will let go of non-Self and non-self to let out Self. Horizons pink. Jesuits riding horses across Japan in the moonlight. Now. Escape feeling. I woke up with myself and was ashamed. I took on your guidance. The Sucking Zoo. Only Today. Silver dreams and a misty prescence. Buddha's foot upon the altar. Sex. I pushed myself down and I was bruised. I was spinning. I was alive with Jubilation and darkness. I did not would not will not exist in Tomorrow.

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**machinery** · August 25th, 2001, 06:39 PM

jumbled beaut here...I like the idea behind this...there are some real strong ideas behind this....was this a nonchalant work, or did it take you awhile...meaning, did you have this idea or did you just write it one night? could be some real solid material if you took some of the ideas out of here and expand them into seperate works....but I do like this piece.... The Sucking Zoo.

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**parch** · August 26th, 2001, 11:32 PM

was it just out of the blue?

yes,.. as i was watching tv i believe. i had just finished writing several pieces of utter shit. ya see... i'm sitting in my dorm room... which i absolutely love the existance of ... and my roommate (who is entirely hilarious and a really great guy) kept talking... kept saying something every few minutes... while i was trying to write.. and i couldnt' concentrate, and so out came shit. finally he went to shit or piss or down the hall or something and i had like 5 minutes to concentrate and Do It. so i did. i had to get it out. i had to get it out right, and precise and the way i wanted... so.... This came.

aside from my description of writing...

explain how i could 'expand some of the ideas' - as you say.

**parch** · August 26th, 2001, 11:35 PM

the biggest problem w/ it is that the rhythmn that i use to read it in my head is a rhythmn that reminds me of something you (rp) wrote a long time ago and it bothers me that it may have the same rhythmn as somebody else's stuff... but maybe i'm just imagining things.

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